Pleasure Time Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Pleasure Time

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I used to see her at week end
We both acted as husband and wife but still good friend
Nothing n to complain but lot more to enjoy
Spend the time with family and friends with joy

It is how we sail through the course
Even though it used to look as rough of course
We were working hard for lovely future
We wanted no loose ends to assure

She was committed more
Not as family member
But as female with kind heart
She smiled with ease as an art

I may sometimes tease her
Remind about responsibility to shoulder
This sometimes annoyed her with anger
I used to be quick enough toward off danger

Such was our life and considered as unique
No one could points us out as fake
We behaved responsibly in public and at home
So we were happy to unite at week end and welcome

It used to be nice experience
This was time we used to enjoy at once
It was our pleasure time
We decided to waste it at no time

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 February 2014

Lisa Lombardi I like first 3 stanzas...they hv a natural sweet flow 11 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 February 2014

Well done Bin Cai24 minutes ago Yes, It's love. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 February 2014

Nice love poem Tom Kennedy26 minutes ago Created wonderful picture

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 February 2014

Rohani Daud likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 February 2014

I used to see her at week end We both acted as husband and wife but still good friend

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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