Pleasureful Agony Poem by Niealie Petit

Pleasureful Agony

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Pleasureful agony bridges both pain and delight.
Surges of excruciatingly enjoyable exhaustion
overtake us complete.
What is his, is now mine, and I give all without
retreat.
Sweat overflows fluidly between us.
The world exists no more;
Blotted out by the syncopated tune of our love swoon.

Monday, February 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 30 April 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Suburban Lovechild 26 March 2015

My kind of write, always seems like the best pleasure always involves a tinge (or more) of agony. Nice job!

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