Wednesday, July 9, 2008

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The wind just blew a paper cup passed my feet
as I walked cold and alone to the corner
My eyes tearing from the wind caught a glimpse
of the lipstick on the end of the straw that protruded
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Ted Sheridan
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Viola Grey 10 July 2008

this is absolutely amazing..sorrow to wallow in your misery, but it's so well exspressed

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*hugs* *love* *more hugs*. Sigh. t x

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