Poem Poem by Murali Sivaramakrishnan

Poem

Rating: 5.0


I love streamers and trailers.
Linked to something it might be easy to trail
Streaming in the wind.

But there is always something to follow.
I love sparklers lit on both sides
They are quick to sign off!

They leave a secret trail
Of streaming sense
Written in the blackness of coal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 18 October 2009

A poem to be read over and again; and a content to ponder over for a life time.......excellent. I think this excellence in imagery and style is acquired from deep Indian roots........it literature.......I always felt so.......as the basic difference between Indian and European poetry.............the feel and expression are exquisite.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 06 August 2009

lovely..the second seems naughty..very picture like

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Marieta Maglas 06 August 2009

nice poem, keep writing.........

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