Poem In The Poet's Palm Poem by Rajiv Khandelwal

If the poem's
Voice and movement
Is Quick
Energetic
Evocative
Is Intense in language
And teeming with lively passion

And if, with vivid images
The poem enriches its texture
Keeping all pieces of puzzle in place
Creates poignant significant moments
Bringing concrete situations vividly to life
Fits the mood

And if, using sensory details
The promising poem shows possibilities
In which, the story telling
Does not go dry
Or loses emotive energy

And if, the poet
Can keep the fleshed out poem
Polished to such gloss
That it almost glows like glass polish surface
With measured punch

And if, the overall effect
Keeps the reader engaged
Tongue-tied

Their expectations met

The poet
Has the perfect poem
In the palm of his hand




Published in India Journal: Bizz Buzz Vol 21,2019 issue
Critique on the above poem by Dr. D.C. Chambial published in India Journal - "Contemporary Vibes - Vol 16, Issue 62, Jan-March 2021"