If the poem's
Voice and movement
Is Quick
Energetic
Evocative
Is Intense in language
And teeming with lively passion
And if, with vivid images
The poem enriches its texture
Keeping all pieces of puzzle in place
Creates poignant significant moments
Bringing concrete situations vividly to life
Fits the mood
And if, using sensory details
The promising poem shows possibilities
In which, the story telling
Does not go dry
Or loses emotive energy
And if, the poet
Can keep the fleshed out poem
Polished to such gloss
That it almost glows like glass polish surface
With measured punch
And if, the overall effect
Keeps the reader engaged
Tongue-tied
Their expectations met
The poet
Has the perfect poem
In the palm of his hand
Published in India Journal: Bizz Buzz Vol 21,2019 issue
Critique on the above poem by Dr. D.C. Chambial published in India Journal - "Contemporary Vibes - Vol 16, Issue 62, Jan-March 2021"
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem