After the Chief of Surgery's diagnosis
He was elated to know
His 95 year old mother
Could be saved
From the life-consuming disease
But the now-or-never operation
Would cost his entire nest eggs
That he had so painstakingly
Set aside
For his daughter's wedding
Who had just turned thirty eight
And whose prospects in the marriage market
Were getting grim by the day
His heart was in a fix
Save a person with a few years to go
Or the one
Who had a full life ahead
Momentarily
He was bedeviled by raging storms
The ‘Custom of Sea'
Looped in his mind
He prayed to God
And sought forgiveness
Published in WEC Volume 12 Number 1 March 2022
I read (much of) the author's bio on PH. I suggest 'nest egg', not 'eggs', and....'more grim' rather than just 'grim'. : ) bri
Welcome to PH. But, WHAT does the 'Custom of Sea' mean? ? ? I would always choose the daughte over the mother in such a situation, but give the daughter the deciding vote, a tough one perhaps.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I give 4 stars. bri : )