Saturday, January 19, 2008

Poet Without Proper Words Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sad salutations,
Funerals that precede death,
Dashed expectations,
Warm moonlight glow
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Uriah Hamilton
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Will Barber 24 January 2008

A most eloquent and evocative portrayal of the isolation imposed by insight into a greater reality than most humans experience. To commend the form of the verse, the rhetorical skill, might be to detract from the message itself. A praiseworthy piece, Uriah. == Will

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Mary Gordley 20 January 2008

You do have beautiful words and the yearning expressed is most touching. Remember though that the pain is only proof you understand how important love is and understanding that is what makes love possible.

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Shannon Wright 19 January 2008

you have a gift to precisely place words where they need to be. -shannon

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Sandra Fowler 19 January 2008

Eloquent write. The third stanza is especially moving. Take care, my poet friend. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Tai Chi Italy 19 January 2008

Feeling our hands are tied and our feet entrenched in such circumstances is the hardest to endure, but your poetry is certainly proper and will express and replenish our hearts needs forever more Uriah! I loved your poem, thank you for it. Smiling at you, Tai

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Ernestine Northover 19 January 2008

Now don't berate yourself Uriah, you send us some lovely words and all so beautifully woven together in a fine weave of poetry. Lovely piece. Lovbe and hugs Ernestine XXX

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