Poetic Love In Action Comments

‘…Love is a liquid - warm - fluid - viscous It does flow over you - one Empathy It does flow under you - one Excavation It does flow through you - one Experience It does flow in you - one Emotion It does flow continuously - one Existence It does flow slowly - one Ecstacy It does flow simultaneously - one Embrace…’ These lines covers all aspects of love and ‘Universal Us’ [my poem] is by embracing.. Ten++ for tournament point of Love...LOL! Ms. Nivedita UK

John this is a poetic presentation of what can and does happen when words from the heart are read, exchanged and taken deep down to the core - - if as this piece portrays it becomes mutual then the whole starry heavens can open and love can lighten life as never before..... wonderful verse which touched my heartstrings - - 10 + ++ Fay