Friday, February 29, 2008

Poetry Comments

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Poetry is the thoughts I have
I write them down for all to see
Some will like them, some will not
But, they all hold some import for me
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COMMENTS
Eddie Larkin 01 February 2009

I like this one very much... you have described quite well WHY we write as we do. Well done, Richard.

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Rico Avila 18 January 2009

Nice, perfectly put. I like this poem a lot and feel it expresses my thoughts exactly. About your comment on my poem. I guess I could have wrote in another verse or two to explain myself further. I know many people love to write poems without rhyme, but even if poems do not rhyme, I think, and most definitions of poems will state, that they are rhythmic. When I read a piece that is confusing, needs to be re-read a few times to understand, is not rhymthic and does not rhyme, I would label it a short story, not a poem. I guess that is just my opinion. But dammit I'm sticking to it.. hehehe. Thanks for input though and nice work.

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Js Black 06 January 2009

Well said! I think you really hit the nail on the head with this one. Great job...Jeff.

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JoAnn McGrath 05 March 2008

Funny I should choose this poem to read....it almost has the theme as my second poem today....so I can really relate to this piece...thanks for sharing: O)

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Thad Wilk 29 February 2008

Lovely poem Richard! Whatever you write i know it will touch many out there! ! *10* Best regards, Friend Thad

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