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Thursday,23rd July 2020
Never try to be unreasonable
and put others in trouble
make them struggle
to prove as good individual
what makes you think?
that by putting some ink on the page!
you can lower his prestige
and come out with well-managed drive
the competition is welcome
suggestions should always come
not pointing out at his/her weak points
but with the highlighting of strong color paint
if you try to throw sand at the sun?
you only shall land in trouble
the sand may fall in your eyes
virtually making you visionless for sometime
poetry is a vast field
everyone will try to hold a good position
ultimately what matters most?
your dedication, presentation and at the most reader's citation
Hasmukh Mehta
True true. Thanks for the encouragement. It can be a lonely world out there. I love the throwing sand at the sun metaphor. Indeed the sand will end up in your eyes.
poetry is a vast field everyone will try to hold a good position ultimately what matters most? your dedication, presentation and at the most reader's citation Hasmukh Mehta
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Date & Time: 7/23/2020 6: 16: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 58824687 - Poetry- Vast Field Member: Deluke Muwanigwa Comment: True true. Thanks for the encouragement. It can be a lonely world out there. I love the throwing sand at the sun metaphor. Indeed the sand will end up in your eyes.