Wednesday, March 26, 2008

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Write a little poem, perhaps make it rhyme,
Count and mark all the beats in time.
Create stories of issues unexpressed,
Fears and sadnesses and feelings repressed.
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Carolyn Brunelle
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Jim Norausky 21 March 2009

A poetic commentary. Well done. Jim

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Michael Pruchnicki 27 March 2008

Make it rhyme, you say measure stresses in each line tell tales of one's woes express fear and sadness Is that what poets do? Do we ache and cry for attention? Are we victims of Asperger's? Autistic until we sit and write?

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poem whore 26 March 2008

I love freedome of what you have writen a short clip clap that pops and snapes I am not shure what to make of that but it sounds exact I think being able to exspress your self no matter if it is by-line or if it is some-one elese story writen throw there eye who cares about recognition...who doesn't to sides neither better then the other I love your poem

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Carolyn Brunelle

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