Point To Ponder Poem by Fatima Obaid

Point To Ponder

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sun is dying
heart is drying
lips are lying
words are flying
without knowing it may hurt;
hurt the listener and effector
Time is passing
cheaters are cheating
people are crawling
crawling and just crawling
around the paper money
for a life sweet like honey
its seems so much funny
that people are becoming irony
for the worldly ease
that wont last forever
this world is just like a breeze
whose temperature never cease
it moves from warm to cold
it moves from cold to warm
and the spring comes in between
sometimes for a short interval
and then the Autumn surely rises
and the deadly passion may then lively rises
this worldly life must has to end
but my friend you have to strive for a better end
there comes a new beginning after this end
amazed beginning that has no end

Wednesday, September 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: point of view
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 15 November 2015

its seems so much funny..............use it, i suggest. or maybe it's so much funny i don't understand use of word irony here. hmm? with so many lines ending with end, it was certainly going to be the END of the poem soon! :) :) i liked your series of -ing ending words and -y ending words. bri :)

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