Poker Poem by Adrian Cox

Poker

Rating: 5.0


I became the joker,
you wouldn't deal me in.
I never had the chance to play
and so I couldn’t win.

if you had been my queen of hearts
I would have found my place,
by being the king in the pack
I could have laid an ace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Gogeshvili 02 September 2011

Hi, It appears that, you've own unique style in poker. An ace - symbol of lonely-man and chance too much for you - to do it in time. Best wishes, Tsira

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Sara Here 13 July 2009

Great imagery (life and love as a game of cards) simple sweet words.Funny in handling your sorrow.if she read it she will sure accept to be the queen of hearts.

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Ruth Walters 12 July 2009

mmmm another interesting one.... Ruthy

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