Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Positive Words - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Take life for example
With fear of troubles
Involve yourself and face
That shall force you to chase

It shall be called inevitable
When you withdraw
From waging the struggle
The life shall remind you of water bubble

Despite known fact
You shall act
Perform whatever is necessary
Even trying for accommodation with an adversary

Never lack courtesy of being mild
Even if thrown allegation to be called wild
That shall never affect simple journey
As you are supported by family

Know your priority and commitment
And try for constant improvement
You may get financial stability with hard work
And life may become so sweet with positive words

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Comments about Positive Words by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/23/2015 9:49:00 PM)


    a welcome Scott Ransopher and 모나리 like this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/23/2015 9:47:00 PM)


    a welcome Scott Ransopher and 모나리 like this.
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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (3/23/2015 5:18:00 AM)


    Never lack courtesy of being mild
    Even if thrown allegation to be called wild
    a good message for one and all.
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  • (3/23/2015 4:10:00 AM)


    Instead of angry or negative words it is advisable to use positive words which brings positive energy in mind and confidence. A beautiful write up. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2015 9:22:00 PM)


    Positive words change life from negative to positive. Hard work brings financial stability. Wonderful poem drafted.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2015 8:23:00 PM)


    Take life for example
    With fear of troubles
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 22, 2015



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