Thursday, October 16, 2008

Pre-Giveaway To Our Precious Grandson Comments

Rating: 4.8

A very happy Birth day to you son and be a good-smart boy like 'Sanath' [not the actor; The world famous cricketer].
Hope you become a real man soon and change the World for better prospects.
No son! Please stay aside and remain as a child forever because the cruel society is precarious.
Your mad grandpa lost his job and still scribbles with a hullabaloo
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Joseph Daly 17 October 2008

Nimal, This is just excellent. You just are incapable of writing just straight-forward dedications. You draw us into your world and mess with our heads with lines such as 'Your mad grandpa lost his job and still scribbles with a hullabaloo' and I get a sense that you know this. The beauty of this, as with all the poems of yours that I have been so honoured to read, is that there is a casuality to what you do. You seem to conjour up words and fix them into lines as if it were the easiest thing in the world. i have never read anything like your writing and I doubt if I ever will because the world has only been blessed with one Nimal. It is not big enough to handle more!

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Sandra Fowler 17 October 2008

Warmth will find a way to bridge all the distances. May you have a ticket to write on that dream train very soon. Siluna is always in our prayers. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Manonton Dalan 16 October 2008

beautiful family poem. i love this. thanks.md

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