iamjc lunaria


do we really have to pretend? ?
... do we consider it to be in our daily route?
is pretension relevant in human beings?
why do we have to pretend? ?

me i dont know, but i used to pretend.. yes most of the time
im pretending... i pretend i have that i have those i am that i am this etcetera etc.
why do i have to? ? ?
well maybe because this means is very well compensating! !

yeah.. by this means i feel so happy... i find happiness by pretending..
as much as possible i don't wanna live on it but i cant help it but to do it over and over again..

sometimes i feel im gaining as a human being...

...by pretending i feel so validated! ! !

yes validated.. maybe that would the bottom line...
validations! ! ! we human beings used this action word just to feel the validity that we havent felt in this so perfect so vivid world of reality..

i have been imprisoned in my own world.. world that ive created because i have been rejected beneath this world of mine! !

I'd rather stick in this perfect world i created just to be so accepted and approved even if it makes me moribund! ! ! !

at least for just a couple of time i can say i sometimes felt so validated! ! ! !

i felt so validated no matter how untrue this might be! ! !

then at the end of the day... satisfaction is not enough to have this validation! ! !

Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 19, 2010

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Comments about Pretend by iamjc lunaria

  • Prince Obed de la CruzPrince Obed de la Cruz (6/29/2010 5:55:00 AM)

    the comment of 'Maureen Desmond' looks like a spam... watch out for that... hey, do i know you? i mean, are you one of the members of SAMA KA? ? ? ? ? a student organization in AMA? ? ? ... anyway, the poem is well expressed the way you wanted it to be... that's nice... i see here that DENISE BEKKER commented on this poem... that i think is one of the famous poets here in poemhunter... very good

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  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (6/26/2010 9:57:00 AM)

    So many wear masks, never revealing their inner heart. We need to stop pretending and just be who we are! Well written! ; D

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