Hasmukh Amathalal

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Prisoner's Release - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Prisoner's release

Think of damage could have been done
If plan was successfully gone
The damage could have been much more
The punishment given effort is subject to sore

The actor shall be released for good conduct
Many fans shall have reason to act in jubilation
But the way he tried to undermine the country
It should not be forgotten by everybody

Think about those who are not caught
Foreign assistance is sought
To bring back the days of arson and loot
With communal harmony suppressed under foot

See the Pathankot* tragedy
It has been witnessed by everybody
Many well wishers may come out in open
and support if the culprits are well known entity

Mainly innocents die due to their support
Politicians, actors, and supporters subvert
Country's governance by inciting mobs
Or staging candle light march in streets

We no signers from enemy country
We have suffered already
Time has come to shut doors
For all those who deserve not to be called good neighbors

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  • (1/9/2016 2:33:00 AM)


    Perfect description of what has been going on in the world, enemies have been released and innocent people have been jailed. It is high time every country close their borders to isis, terrorists, evil. Rebuild from within without subversive and corrupt politicians and governments, let citizens govern themselves. Less chaos from corrupt and greedy people if the people monitor everything that's done. Great poem, makes you think beyond the boundaries of normalcy. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Muhammad Imtiyaz (1/8/2016 11:27:00 PM)


    excellent lines sir....you have brought in two significant episodes that happened recently...we see one being release for his good conduct but on the other hand the designers of pathankot attract are still roaming free in their favourable soil......I liked it very much sir... (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/8/2016 10:48:00 PM)


    We no signers from enemy country
    We have suffered already
    Time has come to shut doors
    For all those who deserve not to be called good neighbors
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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 8, 2016



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