Prize For Comments Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Prize For Comments

Rating: 5.0


I wish here a good prize for comments
It may then be called nice movement
Rare phenomena to encourage new poets
Who otherwise remain in oblivion and prefer to be quiet

We can force no one to read
Yet can provide clue to lead
A momentum to make thrust
For developing skill and trust

Generally I see prominent people find the place
Rest all are seemed to be left out of race
Only few people adore the quarter
Rest all are awaiting break for their starter

Poems do emerge in human mind
As it is divine place to rest and find
What can be beneficial to intelligent people?
As rest even may not understand after making great struggle

I wish and plead for something to prove concrete
Let for one post at least two new comers are greeted
With the deserving comment if that is due
If not by readers then editors must view

With this noble ideas the base may be expanded
The courtesy and honor must be extended
We may have lot many hidden jewels
Those may find light and certainly excel

Just a wish and nothing in person
Yet that must be taken positively with reasons
We may surely fuel the new energy on horizon
Where old and new may combined from all zones

It may not take place in days ahead
But my humble views may certainly be read
Any attempt at revival may afterward then be certainly dead
If we fail to gasp the mood and provide the lead

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Re: Prize for comments (Score: 1) by deepali on Tuesday, July 31,2012 (08: 29: 46) Nice idea...and a lovely poem! warm wishes, D.

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leafsailor I still hold dear the ones who reached out to me, I was so shy and afriad that no one would want my work, I remember. Often poets are complex people, often alone, only adjusting and making do in a world that has no clew as to who they are, I think this is a most important concept, when some one finds a poetry sight and posts, this is in its self an introduction, yes let us all say hello and do our best to make the path welcome. If it is a true poet, they will grow, trouble makers will soon get lost as there eyes can not follow truth! ..peace my friend a well spoken much needed reminder!

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Unwritten Soul 31 July 2012

The prizes for the readers are the beauty of thought in poetry...it can be a nice essence that could be a food for soul.. :) _Unwritten Soul

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Leonard Dabydeen Good write. Thoughtful about fusion with 'new energy' poets. Clevr rhyme.

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I wish here a good prize for comments It may then be called nice movement Rare phenomena to encourage new poets Who otherwise remain in oblivion and prefer to be quiet

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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