Profound Love Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Profound Love

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How to express deep and profound?
Love for you that I have found
You were the first to be smiled at
I sill remember you standing at the gate

I was giving you no chance
You requested also at once
I was in no mood to give in
As I thought it will be male’s win

But soon you over powered me
And left so much desirous of you under tree
That you had called me to express
Love of its kind to bring shine on face

I was startled and amazed
At sky to be gazed
It was craze and pure attachment
Lovely place and powerful moment

Since then I have loved you so much
Time did not allow me as such
Still I longed for closer alliance
You seized and claimed me at once

I have promised to look after
Taken all the vows as lover
“I shall stand by in the time of need”
I repeated several times when he came to greet

I remained calm with no more talk
He silently came and sat back
I whispered and leaned on his shoulder
Just to assure him that I stand firm in offer

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2013

How to express deep and profound? Love for you that I have found

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Gajanan Mishra 03 August 2013

I stand firm in offer, good and great, thanks.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2013

Mitos Jane Nepomuceno likes this. Mitos Jane Nepomuceno A great poet indeed :)) 3 minutes ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2013

Robert Lewis12 minutes ago Well wrote Comment +1 Wow

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2013

Shyanna Gaston14 minutes ago Beautiful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2013

good Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 10 minutes ago good Comment +1 Beautiful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2013

good Leslie11 minutes ago Nicely penned and great flow. keep up the good work Comment +1 exellent

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2013

Ryann Marie Blair13 minutes ago great creative writing piece

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