Profundity Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Profundity

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Just a single drop would
Tell the saltiness of vast ocean
So's with love of yours

Wednesday, February 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,lifestyle,survival,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 12 April 2017

To test the salinity of the ocean, we needn't drink a lot of water! One drop will do! In the same way, to know what is love, just taste a little of love! Great Haiku!

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Thank you Valsa for your analytical comment.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 09 March 2017

Saltiness of ocean holds basis of survival of many creatures. Single drop of love brings fortune to unite life with God. Again this is one wonderful haiku.10

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Thank you again for taking time to read and comment my poems.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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