Problem And Solution - Haiku Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Problem And Solution - Haiku



Fiery Sun snarls from above
Active ant sighs in shelter ‘n cover
Under a scald sod blade

Problem And Solution - Haiku
Wednesday, June 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: action,problem
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 09 August 2017

Wonderful expression and observation. When observed carefully every little scene of nature is amazing.

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Valsa George 12 July 2017

Sometimes the smarting rays of the sun become so fierce that even an ant has to seek shelter under cover! An impressive haiku and an apt image to go with it!

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 July 2017

With the wisdom of the ant. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 June 2017

The fairy sun is above but the ant is active and perform under the scald sod blade.Here we find problem and solution. Best haiku presented. Thanks.

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Thank you Kumar for your comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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