Jazmine Staples

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Promise - Poem by Jazmine Staples

a promise
I didnt make cuz I knew
I couldnt keep it all I heard
was dont let them see u cry
its not her leaving wat made me
it is was the promise
she ask me to keep
I didnt say a word then the tears
came and I saw weakness in her
eyes for the first time
Ive hear her breath
Ive watch her sleep
but y cant I do this for her



its about my sister


Comments about Promise by Jazmine Staples

  • (10/11/2007 6:19:00 PM)

    wow, thats pretty deep...what was the promise? you dont have to tell me if you dont want to (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 10, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 15, 2011


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