Promise me you will be here
Promise that you’ll find the way home
That you will not forget where we walked
Promise that you’ll wait for me
If I am not there
Promise me well walk together
Promise that we can have fun again
Promise me you’ll still act the same
Promise me you’ll make me laugh hard again
Promise that well be together again
So a promise is a promise you always said
So don’t be dumb and forget again
I promise
hi nick..........this is the beginning of a good work.........well done pal.........
I like 'Promise Me' Especially these lines: Promise me well walk together Promise that we can have fun again Promise me you’ll still act the same Very nice, Nick. Very good, indeed.
This is very nice, Nick. I particularly like the last three lines. There is an undercurrent of sadness there, hinted at but not expressed too plainly, so that the lines maintain their strength. Keep writing. Don
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this sound like somthing i would read to my gradfather cause hes forgetting a lot of stuff that happend in this life thanks fot sharing this great poem