'Wat'cha lookin' at?
I'd had enough of this loud mouthed lout,
and his pissed-out-of-mind billigerence;
So my repartee needed to be swift:
'I'll tell you what I'm looking at, a brainless,
boring, inarticulate piece of excrement.'
He slurred a reply sounding something like
'Yar lookin' for a punshup arshole? '
My calm reply, 'I don't fight mentally fragile
cretins - go away! '
Gathering himself to a swaying target
he lurched at me arms flailing -
'I'll do yar, yar barshtard.'
Instinctively I side-stepped and kicked
him up the arse, propelling him through
the swinging doors into the street.
The last I saw of him - he was propped
by an upright mumbling, 'barshtard took
me on cos I were pished - I'll doimlikea
dinnaneshtime.'
'Sorry pal, ' there won't be a neshtime.'
You tell it like it is Jezza and your comic comfortableness with the Australian vernacular is second to none. You capture your mindless brawling Aussie drunk with definitive skill in this great knock-about read. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Brilliant piece. Excellent conclusion too. Best Regards. Craig.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent! ! ! This is a perfect representation of a typical pub brawl, and trust me, growing up with an alcoholic for a father, I've seen my fair share of pub brawls already :)