Friday, February 10, 2006

Puddles And The Crab Comments

Rating: 2.8

Puddles would Hunt
On the ocean Front
Ears and Nose up! , eye's open Wide
There was nothing that could Hide
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David Darbyshire
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Ernestine Northover 11 February 2006

Lovely poem David, light and sweet. A delicious read. Love Ernestine XXX

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aeda sea 10 February 2006

i don't know who voted a 5 or less but they were wrong. this poem has a good message and it's sounds so young and inviting. i feel like i'm on martha's vineyard when i read it. (martha's vineyard is an adorable little island off the coast if massachusetts USA) 10!

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