Punching Bag.. Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Punching Bag..

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Have a few friends, is good,
Be attached with our relatives, is the best,
because we can make them,
the punching bags.

quiet punching bags,
listening punching bags,
tolerant punching bags and
comforting punching bags.

They are just a call away,
call them with confidence,
talk to them,
we are happy and no stress.

They are just a call away,
call them with confidence,
share your thoughts,
only to people, trustworthy.

Stay alone not good,
be a punching bag,
to others. Listen to them,
there will no stressed out people,
loose on the roads,
tears in the eyes,
clouds in the brain,
betrayal in the heart,
looking for booze and drugs.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Williams 27 February 2012

I like this and am the punching bag and clam up to solo for I have no one I trust or perhaps it is alien to speak of personal things with others except my fiencee. Naturally What is personal involving her I just clam up. Would prefer to be an island if at all possible. Strong and warlike to protect her.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 25 February 2012

Yes we love others so they will love us back, care for them so they will care about us too...its good to have someone you can rely on.good poem.

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Raj Arumugam 24 February 2012

Friends and family are good indeed, as they help us through our trials and difficult moments...

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Raj Arumugam 24 February 2012

Friends and family are good indeed, as they help us through our trials and difficult moments...

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