Seema Jayaraman

Gold Star - 14,440 Points (24 Aug / Mumbai)

Purest Form Of Love - Poem by Seema Jayaraman

©Seema Jayaraman, Mumbai,19Sep2015

White doves in the sky
Endless, formless white of light
Apron that encircles

Present in form and thought
Womb offered later Arms to embrace
Mother, chaperone for life

Topic(s) of this poem: mother

Form: Haiku

Poet's Notes about The Poem

my early attempt at Haiku, still a novice learning the technicalities and the intricacies of haiku.

Comments about Purest Form Of Love by Seema Jayaraman

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (2/13/2016 10:50:00 PM)

    Endless, formless white of light... white doves. the womb..... a wonderful combination of thoughts and words. dear seema. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/19/2015 1:24:00 PM)

    Deeply envisioned and aptly depicted. A beautiful poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. ....10 (Report) Reply

    Seema Jayaraman (9/19/2015 11:45:00 PM)

    Thank you Sir this is an early attempt at Haiku though it's technicalities are still confusing

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 19, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 29, 2015

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