Saturday, July 25, 2015

Qualms Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some nights I snuggle in, so warm, deep
Then there are others when I cannot sleep.
It seems tiny monsters with ugly heads
Sit in comfort all around my worn out bed.
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Marilyn Lott
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Amitava Sur 10 September 2015

A lovely poem with a truth telling about all the uneasiness we face thought our life. Very nice expression.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 31 July 2015

Marvellous poetry and inspiring contentment wow. I like how it is appreciative of life and whatever it offers. And u wrote it so creatively in rhyming wow. Kudos. Great to read u again.

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Roseann Shawiak 31 July 2015

Fantastic feelings and emotions vibrating all of my sense within me. Your poem is so all-encompassing through your imagery and explanations. I give it a 10! Totally love this poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Marilyn Lott

Marilyn Lott

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