Queen Of Heartland Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Queen Of Heartland

Rating: 5.0


It takes me back into memory
When she had entered my kingdom already
She was gorgeous queen of my heartland
Ever at peak, it was honor to find her at hand

It is great moment even now
We have emerged as pure gold anyhow
She is with no more doubt and quite happy
I had waited for this day to be ready

My eyes become watery without her glimpse
I feel so down without her and curse
She knocks my door relentlessly
I watch her in my memory box helplessly

Knowingly I catch the icy air
As if to feel the sweet company of her
She reminds me of old time queens
Who used to remain loyal and very keen

More I feel about her the desire climbs
She invades with force and combs
My hair with so kindness and care
I smile with eternal joy and look at her

I know how she feels
I too fully align at will
She stays near as ever
As I hold her hand forever

I imagine her eyes
And honestly try
To read her pulses in words
She leans and smilingly whispers

We do not meet but silently speak
She sends her signal with intensity so weak
I catch it with my powerful antenna
It flows in me as fountain and flora

In fact she waters my plant
That brings out beautiful ants
Thy form one line and follow direction
Rest all gather grain and help in action

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 January 2014

It takes me back into memory When she had entered my kingdom already

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 January 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 January 2014

Possibly needs to go back to Elementary and take an English course. Benjamin Sunderland19 minutes ago This is slamming words. No finesse... and what's with the flowing flora? How does flora flow? And where do the ants come in? How does one enter a kingdom already? If she did enter his kingdom, at some point in this (loosely spoken) poem, how is she then, near as ever? Quite frankly, I don't think his antenna is that big! The only thing this poem tells me is, this man needs an exterminator! Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago normally i respect readers and take their comments seriously.. your comments speaks of bias attitude and poisonous utterances. desist if you can not understand what the poetry is....it is poet's imagination and has nothing to do with reality.. bear one thing in.mind. if you can not contribute, at least do not discourage a person who has world ranking in writing poetry

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welcome Jigar Dalsania, Rukiah Annuar, Victoria Loberiza Grana Padillo like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 January 2014

Nice krishna Middela8 minutes ago It's long story

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 January 2014

Nice krishna Middela8 minutes ago It's long story

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