Quelque Part Pres D'ici; Beaucoup De Miles.(Translation) . Poem by Michael Walker

Quelque Part Pres D'ici; Beaucoup De Miles.(Translation) .

Quelque part pres d'ici, beaucoup de miles,
cette nuit de pluie tombe
fort sur des cabanes au fer ondule
de l'interieure. Ici, manquant des des tuiles;

et si la porte n'etait pas ouverte
il ne peut qu'etre encore
une autre nuit confortable,
la couverture chaude sur la position ouverte...

La pluie tombant fort tandis que
cette banlieu d'Etat dort; on ne
saurait guere...un autre monde
quelque part pres d'ici; beaucoup de miles.

Porirua

-' Somewhere near here; many miles'. Sam Hunt. ' 'Knucklebones. Poems 1962-2012', p.43.

Sunday, February 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Porirua is a working class suburb north of Wellington. There are many state houses in that suburb, where Sam Hunt lived at Bottle Creek, his house on stilts above the shore line. Hunt now lives in the Kaipara Harbour north of Auckland.
It is a night of heavy rain in Porirua and also in a wealthy suburb not far from them, many miles. In the better-off suburb the rain is falling on corrugated iron roofs which gives a very pleasant sound. In Porirua they are 'short on tiles'. In the classier suburb it could be like just another night with the electric blanket on-'if the door weren't open'. But why would you leave a door open at night, or any other time, letting other people see inside? I would never do that.
Meanwhile the state-house suburb is aasleep. They would hardly know of that other world 'near here; many miles'.
New Zealand cities do have rich suburbs and poorer, state-house ones. The poem is accurate in social observation and it implies the likable sound of rain hitting on the roof especially at night.
A final comment. It is not absolutely clear to me which suburb is being referred to, thus some ambiguity.
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