Quickly Poem by Rain Ibison

Quickly



So hot outside..
Sweltering..
The world is spinning much to slowly..
Times passing much to quickly..
I want to lie to you..
Just so you have a false sense of security..
You just know me to well..
You see the lie before it is spoken..
You see the fear in my eyes..
I'm faintly here, less and less as the days go by..
Mostly because of the smoke that chokes me..
It fills my lungs as it slowly kills me..
Turning black and resembling tar..
These times are becoming much to hard..
I care so much..
I just wish i could stop..
Doesnt seem worth it anymore..
The world is crashing down..
Shaking and breaking apart beneath out feet..
Fix this oh so broken world..
Its not to late..
It begins now..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyf Burns 01 June 2011

Hmm.... It sounds like you have a friend or family member getting too close to you, and you almost just want them to leave you alone. But in the 16 and 21 lines, you can tell that you need this person, and probably don't want to imagine your life without them.

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