K.. K..


Quicksand

Poem by K.. K..

your love
swallows me whole
enveloping me in warmth
closing in
tighter
sucking the air from my lungs
drowning me in heat
crushing me with lust
sinking through my pores
til I am no more than a memory
in the quicksand of our love


Comments about Quicksand by K.. K..

  • Alison Smith (2/23/2007 1:45:00 PM)

    Excellent write... makes you feel like you are drawn into quicksand...

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  • THE LAST REMNANT OF SANITY BIDS YOU ADIEU (2/23/2007 1:31:00 PM)

    Powerful! Thanks for sharing.(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 23, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 22, 2011