Quo Vadis? Comments

Nice expression and flow in the poem. Should blossomed be changed to blossomed?

Your poem reminds me of sayings of R.N. Tagore: Give me back wood in lieu of civilization and Matatma Ghandhi-ji: Go back to ‘bullock-cart-age’…you’ve posed very aptly and poetically ably Quo Vadis? Finally you conclude: ‘…we are now in a virtual world/we are now condemned to a limited living….we’ve net us in ‘self-imprisonment’…and [? ] Enjoy ‘self-torture-tingle [STT]’ … Nuclear family …is nuclear bomb lolol… radiation of self-imposed-radiation-effect we’re enjoying its STT 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

We are forcing ourselves. We have tripped the self-destruct switch.

very deep. so many things in common with everyone..loved it.