On railroad platforms shadows stream,
Hurry home to painted dreams
Unleashed from bare necessity
Wishing they were truly free
In the comfort of their homes.
And yet I see intensity
Still grips them in its iron claw
Since though in crowds they are alone
Shadows streaming in one flow.
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H Jane, I was thinking of Eliot's lines in The Waste Land " people, humble people who connect nothing with nothing. I'm not so pessimistic as he was but I sometimes feel a twinge of sadness when i look round Railroad platforms. It's hard to explain but your phrase " dark places" is part of it. Thanks for your comment.
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That was extraordinary how you put across an intense feeling of melancholy in a scene of hustle bustle at a railroad station. You are an exceptional poet, I am never disappointed and often am challenged by your skills