Rain Poem by PSyChoPaTh emo.91

Rain

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Down pours the rain,
In harmony with its drops,
Down pours the rain,
With all its might and glory.
Oh, how I adore your magnificence,
for beneath that wild exterior,
there lies my sweet desire.
To those who seek expression,
it is a sweet inspiration,
where all is reawaken,
and things start anew.
Come daylight, all is reawaken.
Come twilight, all starts anew.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 17 September 2007

dear psypath, lovely poem, rain is a renewal of hope and almost the next day you find the grass some cm longer, john tiong chunghoo. thanks for commenting on my poem. by the way you can also celebrate the fact that i am from sarawak, your own countryman.

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Lily Law 25 February 2009

Sweet..... Keep it up.. ^-^

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Egi David Perdana 01 November 2008

I always read many lyric and poems about rain and I think it's one of the best, I'm wrote lyric about rain but my poems not better than this poems

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Emily Oldham 01 November 2008

i love poems about rain........ this is beautiful............. keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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The sweet water of life pours down on us or surrounds us in mist.lovely poem.

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~ Jon London ~ 28 May 2008

What a beautiful way of expression you have, I really liked the tone..lovely job Best wishes Jon

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