Rain Poem by Christopher Jackson

Rain



Alleviating, almost a mist,
Vertical, perfect,
Smashing crystals on the,
Rugged floor.

Just a trickle nothing more
But if sweet downpour
Can cause such pain,
Let it rain on me forever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 27 October 2006

Excellent write, Christopher... interesting use of words and a great ending line! Brian

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Anjana Aravind 03 July 2006

Chris, You have the makings of a great poet.You have a way with words which I like. But if sweet downpour Can cause such pain, Let it rain on me forever. What a wonderful verse. I like it. Anjana

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