Christopher Jackson

Rain

Alleviating, almost a mist,
Vertical, perfect,
Smashing crystals on the,
Rugged floor.

Just a trickle nothing more
But if sweet downpour
Can cause such pain,
Let it rain on me forever.

Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 25, 2006

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  • Brian DornBrian Dorn (10/27/2006 12:49:00 PM)

    Excellent write, Christopher... interesting use of words and a great ending line!
    Brian

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  • Anjana Aravind (7/3/2006 6:38:00 AM)

    Chris,
    You have the makings of a great poet.You have a way with words which I like.

    But if sweet downpour
    Can cause such pain,
    Let it rain on me forever.

    What a wonderful verse. I like it.

    Anjana

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