Alleviating, almost a mist, Vertical, perfect, Smashing crystals on the, Rugged floor. Just a trickle nothing moreBut if sweet downpourCan cause such pain, Let it rain on me forever.
Excellent write, Christopher... interesting use of words and a great ending line!
You have the makings of a great poet.You have a way with words which I like.
But if sweet downpour
Can cause such pain,
Let it rain on me forever.
What a wonderful verse. I like it.
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