Melissa Patty

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Rain - Poem by Melissa Patty

The pitter patter of the rain
As it falls its hitting of the window pane
Particles of the cold wet drops
The clouds goes grey over the housetops
Feeling miserable of the rain hitting your face
The skies are gloomy and as you walk there's puddles are all over the place
This is the time to use an umbrella to keep dry
No-one likes the rain and asks the reason why
The rain is a key ingredient to help grow crops
Bringing a heathy produce to our supermarkets and shops
Rain can be fun to splash around
With all the puddles lying on the ground
Its nice when your cosy in your house listening to the rain fall
Knowing your not out in the cold is the best feeling of all
Rain goes in a continuous cycle, clouds are, heavy, rain falls, evaporates rain then continues this process again
In these days remember to wrap up well when the skies opens the Rain!

By Melissa Patty

Topic(s) of this poem: rain

Form: Narrative


Comments about Rain by Melissa Patty

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/5/2015 9:30:00 AM)


    Yes wonderfully rain can be fun to splash around. Very interesting and wise poem shared definitely here.10 (Report) Reply

    Melissa Patty Melissa Patty (12/5/2015 9:39:00 AM)

    It can, Thankyou very much for reading and rating it I appreciate it a lot!

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 5, 2015


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