Melissa Patty

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Mum - I Miss You - Poem by Melissa Patty

Mum you were everything that I could wish for or see
You were always there with me
I cry to tears in all that I do
Life is so hard without you
I love you in my heart so deep
Knowing all those memories that I'll keep
You were strong to keep on going
The love for my Mum keeps on flowing
My Mum was an outstanding Mum in all that I'll say
I miss my Mum everyday
My Mum was the stars in my eyes
My Mum is up in heaven above the skies
Time without my Mum won't heal the missing part
But I know my Mum will always be in a special place, my heart
My Mum was a fighter throughout being so ill
I'll never let go as the love will always fill
Nothing will change what I feel because time apart goes wide
My heart has a picture by my side
May the Lord keep her safe in heaven everyday
My mum is my guardian angel guiding my way
I'll never forget my Mum as I say goodbye
As tears hit my eye
I just want my Mum to come back again
Without my Mum, my heart is bleeding in pain
My Mum always was so caring to everyone, she had a heart of gold
She had such a loving heart in that I hold
The pain was agony which was hard to see
My Mum is in no more pain but she is always beside me
I will always remember her laugh, her cry, her goodness and the way she always tried her best
My Mum is sleeping peacefully now she's at rest
Time without her feels like my heart is shrinking into a thousand pieces and I can't seem to put it back together
One day we will meet again in heaven and live forever
I'll blow my Mum a kiss and say goodbye
I'll never forget my Mum, as I gaze up to the brightest star in the sky

Topic(s) of this poem: death

Form: Elegy


Poet's Notes about The Poem

In Loving Memory of my Mum <3

Comments about Mum - I Miss You by Melissa Patty

  • (11/7/2016 4:15:00 PM)

    ‘My Mum is up in heaven above the skies’

    Melissa, your tribute to your mother is very heartfelt. The love and warmth, it touched my core. She was a lovely person. Don't worry, Heaven is the best and safest place that she can be. Peace to you.
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    Melissa Patty(11/8/2016 11:59:00 AM)

    Awk, Thankyou so much, thats means alot! God Bless you

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  • David Boyce (4/24/2016 3:38:00 PM)

    Lovely poem, written from the heart with love and comfort for the mam you loved and cared about.
    God less!
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    Melissa Patty(4/25/2016 6:45:00 PM)

    Thankyou very much! That means a lot!

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/10/2016 1:37:00 AM)

    Yes, she's at rest. Death is part of us. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Melissa Patty (2/23/2016 1:13:00 PM)

    Thankyou so much! Means alot (Report)Reply

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet Simon (2/21/2016 9:34:00 PM)

    Such a touching and tender tribute. Well done! (Report)Reply

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  • Drtony Brahmin (2/16/2016 10:36:00 PM)

    Time without my Mum won't heal the missing part
    But I know my Mum will always be in a special place, my heart
    My Mum was a fighter throughout being so ill
    I'll never let go as the love will always fill
    Nothing will change what I feel because time apart goes wide..

    i too l ost my mum at an early age. i know and feel what you write. a wonderful poem on the love of the mother. God bless you. tony
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    Melissa Patty(2/17/2016 8:42:00 AM)

    Awk Thankyou so much, I'm so sorry to hear that, its nice to know I'm not alone Thankyou very much for
    Reading this! God Bless to you

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/6/2016 3:34:00 AM)

    Life and death! ! And, to miss a mother. Like i lost my mother recently. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(1/6/2016 5:03:00 PM)

    Its hard, ask I'm so sorry to hear that Thank you

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  • Abderrahmane Dakir (1/5/2016 4:55:00 AM)

    The mother is the best lovable person for us since she thinks a lot for us. Thank you so much for this amazing poem. (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(1/5/2016 8:43:00 AM)

    Thank you for your comment and rating, I appreciate a lot!

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  • Melvina Germain (8/14/2015 9:50:00 PM)

    Awww such a beautiful, beautiful elegy in remembrance of you amazing mother. She gave birth to a daughter who has heart and soul and that makes her amazing. Much love to you sweet sister..... (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(8/15/2015 4:08:00 AM)

    Wow thankyou, this comment really touched me. Such a nice thing to wake up to. My mum is in my heart forever I miss her millions. Thankyou for brighting up my day with this beautiful comment. Much love to you to!

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  • (8/2/2015 8:55:00 AM)

    So touching Melissa and so real. (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(8/2/2015 9:11:00 AM)

    Thankyou very much!

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  • (7/26/2015 3:19:00 PM)

    Wow! It's so emotional (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(7/26/2015 5:49:00 PM)

    Awwwwk, thankyou for reading!

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2015 10:46:00 AM)

    I just want my Mum to come back again
    Without my Mum, my heart is bleeding in pain....19

    so real feelings

    She will enter room gently
    Put books on shelf orderly
    Set the quilt on body
    With all the care so motherly
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    Melissa Patty(7/25/2015 11:10:00 AM)

    Thankyou for your nice comment ☺means a lot!

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  • Ramesh Rai (7/18/2015 12:07:00 AM)

    Mother has no replacement. She is the angel and always with you in your every breath. May her soul rest in peace. With love affection and more and more blessing. (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(7/18/2015 4:44:00 AM)

    That is such a beautiful comment, thank you so much. That's true, she is always with me no matter
    What. She is kept safe in my heart forever. She's in perfect peace.💗

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  • (7/14/2015 9:07:00 AM)

    This is beautiful and very heart feeling....hopefully you will meet again and she will share much with you.... I wrote a similar one. Not on poem hunter yet. (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(7/14/2015 9:28:00 AM)

    Thankyou very much for your kind words means a lot. Awk you definitely have to put it up so I see it.

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  • Suburban Lovechild (1/25/2015 9:00:00 PM)

    Very heartfelt (and heart-wrenching) , yet she obviously created someone who continues to capture and carry her memory and legacy everyday...thank you for sharing this moving tribute to your Mum... (Report)Reply

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  • Lyn Paul (1/23/2015 7:08:00 PM)

    You have covered so many special things about your adorable Mum. I hope you have printed these wonderful words with the most sparkling frame, for you Mum was a Diamond and still lives so strong in your heart.
    I thank you for sharing your feelings and may I say thank you for the photograph of you both.
    Take good care. x
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    Melissa Patty(1/24/2015 4:33:00 AM)

    Awk thankyou very much :) means alot :) that is true she will always will be in my heart nomatter what. No problem :) thought it would be a nice finishing touch putting a picture with it. Thankyou [3
    Same to you to Take good care xx

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 23, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 24, 2015


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