Melissa Patty

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Life Is Full Of Emotions - Poem by Melissa Patty

The world seems like one big dream
If only I could wake up from this nightmare and scream
To take all my happiness aside
Living with this pain, there so many tears I've cried
I wish life was easy to live
So many words and emotions I can give

Give me strength to find my way
To help me through each and everyday
Life is full of challenges that you face wherever you may be
All I want is to have happiness in my life, I want a happier me!


Melissa Patty

Topic(s) of this poem: emotions

Form: Elegy


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Life is full of every emotion.

Comments about Life Is Full Of Emotions by Melissa Patty

  • Drtony Brahmin (5/15/2016 8:14:00 AM)

    Give me strength to find my way
    To help me through each and everyday
    Life is full of challenges that you face wherever you may be
    All I want is to have happiness in my life, I want a happier me!

    A simple dream.......... begin to help the poor. be there when they need you. sometimes you cannot be physically present. but you can always help if u want..... try........... happiness will surely come your way and be related with God. this is a fine poem . very clear notions. very fine words..and expressions.... tony
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  • Soul Watcher (4/25/2016 6:12:00 AM)

    I liked this poem thank you for sharing it with us (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/10/2016 1:38:00 AM)

    Emotions! ! Give me stength to find my way out. Nice work. (Report)Reply

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  • Rishi Thakkar (1/11/2016 10:16:00 PM)

    In few words uve given us a dream..
    A dream we all wish to live..
    Be happy in life have peace...
    But life doesn't work that way...
    It has its own tunes n it's ways to play...
    Enjoy the music express urself with poems that's all a poem has to say :)
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    Melissa Patty(1/12/2016 3:46:00 AM)

    True words, thankyou for reading it

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  • C. P. Sharma (1/5/2016 7:31:00 AM)

    Very well expressed emotions of your mind, Melissa. But I would say that there are two choices before each one of us. Either we let our mind make us of we make our mind. The first choice leads to servitude and the second makes you the master. The choice is ours. (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(1/5/2016 8:44:00 AM)

    Thankyou very much that means a lot, yeah that it so true.

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  • Melvina Germain (8/15/2015 7:58:00 PM)

    Emotions pour out of this piece, thank you for sharing Melissa..... (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(8/16/2015 3:13:00 AM)

    Awk thankyou, No problem thankyou for reading it

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  • (8/2/2015 8:52:00 AM)

    Very emotional piece Melissa. I gather from the essence of your poems that you are at a confusing and difficult point in your life. It is commendable that this is expressed and is being grasped. Well done and keep writing. (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(8/2/2015 9:17:00 AM)

    Awk thankyou very much for your kind words it means a lot. Yeah it is, writing helps me alot.I will do. Thankyou again x

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  • Kirby Wright (7/20/2015 8:38:00 AM)

    Fitzgerald said to begin with the poem as an entry point for writing and you are definitely on the right track. What you are doing now is like a runner training for a marathon, taking one lap at a time in preparation for a lifetime of writing.

    BTW, my roots are in Cork and I have a story online there, should i send?
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    Melissa Patty(7/20/2015 10:34:00 AM)

    Awk thankyou for your encourgment. Awk, yes definitely I would love to see it!

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  • Ramesh Rai (7/17/2015 11:58:00 PM)

    It is cent percent right and we are survived with our emotion to do it to get some new. Stay blessed with full of joy love and peace. Keep writing never stop writing. It will give you strength in your life. You may be having so many problems but when you are with poetry you will get divine pleasure.. You are gifted with beautiful emotion of expression of your thoughts and feelings. (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(7/18/2015 4:39:00 AM)

    Thankyou for kind words, I will never stop writing. Poetry has been my backbone, I really don't know
    what l would do without it. Poetry is my escape from everything, it makes me feel free. That comment means a lot to me, thankyou a million.

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  • Paul Amrod (7/14/2015 10:45:00 AM)

    Hi From Paul, I have a guitar player who is from Belfast named Brendan O'Kelly. He feels musch the same as you do. I wish you stamina and strength and the courage you need. Paul (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(7/14/2015 12:09:00 PM)

    Awk that is so cool, thank you very much, its nice to hear that someone knows how you feel.
    God Bless you x

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  • (7/14/2015 9:12:00 AM)

    Without challenges there is no victory... Challenges are meant to bring out the victory in us. You write well my friend. Good one there (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(7/14/2015 9:25:00 AM)

    Yeah that is true, thankyouu very much!

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  • Sheldon Carruthers (7/8/2015 7:53:00 PM)

    well penned. I enjoyed reading your poem. (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(7/9/2015 3:53:00 AM)

    Thankyou very much 😃

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 8, 2015



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