Rating: 3.0
Rain is falling all around
My head lays down upon the ground
Raindrops dribble down face
As my eyes stare towards outerspace
My thoughts they drift around and round
As I listen for the sound
The raindrops hitting everything
The noise they make a gentle ping
My heart is calm and so am I
As the rain falls from the sky
The gentle drops they wash away
The pain from yet the other day
Saturday, December 2, 2006
Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 19 January 2009
A beautiful poem. Enjoy the rain again...watching... Drops jumping from one leave to the others Making a twittering sound faling onto the ground running in ques along the telephone wire... rain is a nature's gift provoke thoughts in poetry. 10 for this fine work
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Keith Hendrickson 04 January 2009
nice work. loved the way you ended it. flows realy good too
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Jimi Doyle 02 December 2006
i like it; it's real
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