Friday, July 20, 2012

Rain-Dreary Day Comments

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I'm chilled to the bone this rainy day.
It's been pouring and pouring my time away.
My words are circling again in my head
while the rain comes down and the worms are fed.
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Edwina Reizer
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Valerie Dohren 21 July 2012

We've had far too much rain in GB this summer, so I know just what you mean - good write.

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Robin Bennett 20 July 2012

Another lovely write Edwina! The big difference between you and I is I love to write when it is grey and raining like today. The summer heat saps most of my inspirations. I can totally realate to the closing line! I always believe a great write should have a killer opening line to hook the reader and I great close so they want more. You accomplished this with ease and grace. Beautiful work!

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Edwina Reizer

Edwina Reizer

LAKEWOOD, NJ
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