Rain Drops Poem by LUZAAN de Bruyn

Rain Drops

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THE RAIN DROPS FALLING ON THE ROOF
IM SITTING, LISTENING, MAKING NO MOVE
THE SOUND SO WONDERFUL
THE FEELING SO POWERFUL
LYING ON THE GROUND
ONLY HEARING THE RAIN DROPS SOUND
THERES NO LIGHT
ONLY THE COLD BREEZE IN THE NIGHT
THUNDER STORMS RISING
CARS SLOWLY DRIVING
ACCIDENTS MAY ACCURE
PEOPLE SUDDENLY HAVE NO FEAR
FORGETTING ALL THEIR PAIN
STARTING TO DANCE IN THE RAIN
THEN IT STOPPED
THE LAST RAIN DROPPED
THE SUN SHOWING ITS FACE
THE RAIN DISAPPEARED WITHOUT A TRACE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Silent Speaker 10 July 2009

Out of all the poems I've read by you, this is my favorite. I LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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This was like a snapshot into a magical piece of poetry. I could see you sitting there and watching the splendor unfold. Well done. 10 Karin Anderson

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Lynda Robson 17 December 2008

Good write, nice flow, I can almost hear the raindrops falling, 10 Lynda

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Anthony Edmond John 15 December 2008

Hello... Nice poem I cherish Ur Lines..Cheers. The Sage Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

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