Friday, July 27, 2012

Rain! It's Reining Comments

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drops dazzling my drapery
whole sky orchestring your chariot
riverside sand perfumes longnecked furrows
no mountain my surroundings as far gaze grazing
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Pranab K Chakraborty
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Allemagne Roßmann 02 August 2012

flagging marvelous lucracy the human beheaded with its heart-throb -superb line.Rain reins coz` it is a weapon what could not be stopped be it it reins more in monsoon.Tigers rein coz` they like rainforests and mangroves be it they are only 1400 in India.When they are zero they are going to still reign history than those cows who will reign grazing on green fields without knowing how to reign or if they are reigning at all.So rain pitter patter-Regentröpfen auf dem Fenster klopfen.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 30 July 2012

The various images are well depicted in this poem! very interesting to read, though it takes a bit long to understand! Nice poem, PKC.

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