Rating: 5.0

Slow down
like raindrops
already fallen,
enjoy the mud
on your boots,
the sunlight
when it
reaches you.

Saturday, April 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: rain,relax
Robert Murray Smith 28 April 2018

A wonderful image filled write.+++10 Robert

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Michael Walker 30 April 2018

A very good start to your poetry writing. I like to slow down and enjoy the sunshine, not be always on the run.

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Pallab Chaudhury 29 April 2018

Slow down- for a while. You'd find Silky clouds are sailing Across the sky. Slow down. Only then You'd find To see the see-saw game Between LIGHT and SHADOW On the leaves of paddy grain. Slow down- We'd then Go to see Where swallows play in the rain. The music of life would be listened Once again. Very nicely depicted love and life. Thank you for sharing with us.10+ With best wishes. PC .

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 April 2018

slow down. recently i had a heart attack. Doctors told me the same advice as u wrote here in your poem. slow down. take it easy........dont think too much.....slow down and enjoy the raindrops when it falls on your boots, thank u dear poetess. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 April 2018

Dear Marissa, such a great poem...10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2018

During rainy season road becomes muddy and us sticks to boots. Raindrops give amazing reflection coming in contact with sunlight. Wonderful imagery is drawn in this poem...10

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