Searching Poem by Marissa Oakley Browne

Searching



My
Soul
Searches
Far Beyond
The skin cell layer
For an answer to who I am
To drive me on to better things
To appreciate
What I have
Right here
And
Now

Thursday, May 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: identify,life,reflections
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a Fibonacci poem with the sequence 1,1,2,3,5,8,8,5,3,2,1,1
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 23 May 2018

A most precise sequence. The soul and the body (skin) remain a mystery to me. Your searching poem reminded me that I am more certain of my body's existence than my soul's. It is important to appreciate the good things we have, not take them for granted. Right on.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2018

Far beyond! ! Into another realm. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Practicing Poetess 12 May 2018

A simple, succint summation of soul and self, softly spoken.

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