Sunday, August 31, 2008

Raindrops And Teardrops Comments

Rating: 5.0

Raindrops pitter-patter
against the windowpane,
teardrops run down my cheeks
whenever I am in pain.
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David Harris
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D..... this isn't like you... though in terms of engaging and touching poetry it is. I hope you're ok..... I am guessing this is one of those 'times past' pieces. (Did you get your invitation yet?) t x

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Sid John Gardner. 31 August 2008

Looking out of the window I can understand the sentiment.Listening to the weather forecast this coming week its going to rain heavier that it has for the last month.Only difference is that the temperature will fall by 4 degrees too.I understand there is pathos within your words but cheer up David and let us all pray for a return of the good old sunshine.. Sid.

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Mamta Agarwal 31 August 2008

hi David, this is such a touching poem.

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Tsira Goge 31 August 2008

Hello David, Beautiful poems. It is well made... I wish only cheerful rainy a rhythm in a shower and only joyful tears on yours cheeks.... 10......... Tsira

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 31 August 2008

Yes the rain hides the tears my friend, that fall without end... Andy 10

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