Random Night-Thoughts Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Random Night-Thoughts

Rating: 4.6


My neck is cracking

whilst looking at the moon,

a cat is meowing in the neighbourhood:

interrupting my meditation;

so I go inside and write.

And as I write, I see a fly

finding its bed for tonight

at the tip of a coniferous branch

in my vase; and suddenly, I realise,

I had too many beers tonight…

But I comfort myself

with the thought, that

without drink, probably

I would have not noticed the moon,

the cat, the fly, and myself

acknowledging

that I had too many beers!

Monday, May 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: drink,moon,night,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 03 July 2018

A cat is meowing in the neighbourhood. This is breaking your meditation. You are looking at the moon continuously and feeling tired and this sign is felt well. Still you are very comfort acknowledging this imagery of night moon. An amazing sharing is done here with beautiful expression...10

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Hazel Durham 22 May 2018

Original and beautiful train of thoughts, I could vividly imagine the moon shining, the cat meowing in the distance and the fly finding a bed in the coniferous tree in your vase.....definitely too many beers... Great write!

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Robert Murray Smith 21 May 2018

Poetry is about random thoughts.++10

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