Rashomon Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Rashomon



A breeze arouses the poet,
8.15, Aug.6
Down by my paulownia.

'The poet smiling,
Down by your paulownia.
Let's not take our fans.'

'Poet's smiling sense of fall,
Pure comic relief
From summer's beguiling thrall.'

'Poet's autumn call,
Far before the fall of leaf:
That is my belief.'

'Down by your paulownia,
The poet smiling.
I'll be bringing my fan.'

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A sequence of Haiku: 757 575 757 575 757. Autumn in Japan can first be detected around Aug.6 by poets in the vicinity of paulownia trees.
8.15, Aug,6 was the time of the Hiroshima bomb.
'Rashomon' is the Kurosawa movie in which several people had different recollections of the same event.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 13 March 2013

Complex and intricate with history, meaning and imagery. Paulownia tomentosa - Dragon Tree, another Asian symbol. Great work to adhere to the Haiku format in a sustained write.

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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