That sure sign
that you're dealing with poetry,
o' for 'of',
as in 'a glimpse
O' the blue above',
is not sure at all.
You could be under an oaf,
yelling your second-last sentence:
'Get off o' me you oaf! '
Two lines more:
from the long line of oafs, that sign
ne'er was sure.
A well penned poem of the day. Simply exceptional. Congrats on your featured piece.....10++++
Many congratulations for this brilliant poem being featured as Poem of the Day!
smart expression……..congrats for being selected the poem as POD……deserves 10+
Everything was there in that uniform were all modesty, righteous sense, civilized behavior but what did happen ghostly accident by that hands behind all humane mood rough, clumsy, illiteracy on good manner though heard- " I can't breathe! " Oh! Ended that last step through grey fair eyesight everything happened suddenly, accidentally.... intentionally! -may not be, may no be
You could be under an oaf, yelling your second-last sentence: 'Get off o' me you oaf! ' ...........yeah; but ..............(Next Comment)
Poetry nowadays with language as you put it in your way Very well scripted with good concept....10++
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I would like to translate this poem
I like this, especially the line about your second-to-last sentence!