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Rating: 4.8

Something is crawling
Not so quick

not so slowly
in the middle of my belly

It can not be an insect
Or a reptile

As I feel its claws

Scratching the walls
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 June 2013

A chaos poverty , , , that rattles

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David Wood 21 May 2013

I agree with Diane, we cannot shoot the messinger. Lovely poem.

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Diane Hine 20 May 2013

The certainty that sooner or later we'll have to deal with bad news. Perfectly expressed. The poem resonates (or rattles) .

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Captain Cur 19 May 2013

The gnawing insecurities of man infests us all. We all live in a house of cards. Nicely written, your words created a slow beat to the inevitable fall.

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